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Garden hose
Coiled on the lawn
Covered in snow.


Halfway through a word
I stop.
My pen ran out of ink.


In the backyard
A flowerpot
In pieces.


Blue paper
Folded into an airplane
Hits a wall.


Someone walks in the door
Looks around
And leaves again.
©2007-2009 ~darbanana
:icondarbanana:

Author's Comments

Don't tell me. They're not 5/7/5. I know. They are non-rhyming three line poems that try to capture an image, which is a haiku without the 5/7/5 thing.

...yeah. They don't really go together except in the sense that I was sitting there looking at things and writing about them, so they all occurred within about 20 minutes. And I felt silly submitting them separately because they're so short.

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